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發現文字這玩意相當的有趣,一樣的意思有很多種不同的表示法,
                                                                               
也有不同的修飾法。
                                                                               
有些人寫出字來讓人讀的清晰有條理,
                                                                               
有些人寫出來讓人想罵看林良,
                                                                               
有些人長篇大論但是看完後還是讓人想罵看林良,
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
我把我慣用的文字手法歸類為三種,
                                                                               
                                                                               
第一種是平舖直述的敘事文,就是一直線的想到什麼就寫什麼,
                                                                              
白話中的白話,像對話一般的寫法。
                                                                               
例:  今天在天母打球,有一場本來已經五比二快被幹掉了,
                                                                               
    然後令北突然起乩連得四分,瞬間逆轉勝,我看到對手傻眼的眼神,好爽~
                                                                               
                                                                               
第二種是類似小說寫法的情境文,因為要令人感受情境,所以很咬文嚼字,
                                                                               
    而且通常會很大篇,不過我很喜歡用這種寫法寫東西。
                                                                               
例:  滴著汗,在天母的一個角落,我的橫移慢了半步,一陣風似的黑影就這樣閃過,
                                                                               
    我回頭望向天空,搖晃的籃網下對手雀躍的擊著掌,看來這場戰役在瞬間就會結束,
                                                                               
    的確,在一眨眼的時間,比賽結束了,我高舉著雙手,嘴角微微的向上兒翹。
                                                                               
    在接到球的那一瞬,筆直升起、緩緩落下,我在空中割出了一縷圓弧,但這並不夠,
                                                                               
    旋轉了90度的另一側亦是相同機械般的動作,我瞥見敵手眼中溢出不安的陰影,
                                                                               接著一個箭步直貼到了我的胸前來了,但我想他只感到風從他兩頰刮過,
                                                                               
    電光石火間的三步將比賽帶入最後關頭。此刻空氣中有種令人窒息的低壓,
                                                                               
    而且持續地向我邁進,我曉得這最後一槍將不會是由我扣下板機,
                                                                               
    死神的鐮刀繞過我的腰間、經過我的龍尾骨、穿過一道陝長的縫隙,
                                                                               
    交到了隊友手中,在他緩緩地將刀鋒劃破空氣之際,
                                                                               
    我看見了敵人那不可置信的神情,他們看到了我將雙手高高舉起,嘴角泛起微笑。
                                                                               
                                                                               
第三種是像交報告的論說文,也可以說是正式的用語,當我正經的時候就看的到了。
                                                                               
例:    今日在位於天母的球場有一場可稱的上是經典的比賽,
                                                                               
    比賽在已五比二落後的情況下,由我帶頭逆轉。先是兩記的外線,
                                                                               
    對手似乎還未回神,出乎意料的我的一球切入將比數拉至五比五,
                                                                               
    然而可想而知的是對方的緊迫看守,慶幸的是在最後一刻我將球給了出去,
                                                                               
    製造了一次的助攻,也獲得了此次的勝利。
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
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這樣我是不是該去開個部落格,然後寫個爽~
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